Hi all! This page will be used to display the feedback that I have received from my fellow COMM140 students, as well as two pieces of feedback that I have given to my peers on how they could also improve their blog.

Feedback on my first blog post

I would love to give a special thank you to both Carla and Emily Rumble for providing me with insightful ideas and responses to my first blog post “Do digital natives exists?”. Please see my fourth blog post for how I have taken on board the advice of my peers and updated my discussion on this question.

Feedback that I have given to others

My first piece of Feedback was for Carla Vivarelli, whose blog was professional as well as insightful. To see my feedback displayed on Carla’s blog, simply click the following link:

https://carlavivarelli.wixsite.com/website/four

“Hey Carla, I’m Abbey and. ill be reviewing your first blog post “Could i live without Digital and Communication Technologies?”. Firstly, im a big fan of your blog’s theme and layout. It is professional and inviting and the little cactus symbol at the top is a cute personal touch. On your first post i love your reference to Boyle. The infromation is particularly insightful and adds depth and credibility to your argument. I’d probbaly flesh this out a bit more as it is really interetsing information. For example, maybe using examples of how digital technologies can make us feel safe. I also loved how you related the topic to your own lif eby giving example of your morning routine. Perhaps to make your post a little more engaging you could add more pictures and visual information or provide statistics through images that can further enhance your argument. Keep up the great work!”

 

My second piece of feedback was for Leah Vorgiatzidis, whose blog was fresh and inviting! To see my feedback on Leah’s post, visit her blog at the following link:

https://leahvorgiatzidis.wixsite.com/comm140leahv/blog-1

“Hey Leah, I’m Abbey and I’ll be reviewing your first blog post “Is the final product more important than the design and production process?”. Firstly I’d just like to say that I love the theme of your blog. The moving background is intriguing to the eye and adds a unique sense of tranquillity and personality that’s welcoming, and makes me look forward to reading on. On your first post, you have done a fantastic job of backing up your opinion with evidence from relevant academic sources, adding credibility to your argument. Perhaps to further enhance this, you could add personal anecdotal evidence from your own life to make your post more relatable to your readers, and also to add more depth to your argument . Lastly, I really liked the little image on the right of your post. The colours tie in nicely with your theme and keep everything looking interesting and professional. Keep up the great work!”